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Six Word Story:

Loving you has become muscle memory.



(hz)
Six Word Story.

I don't know how to train 

my heart to keep a steady 

rhythm when I hear your name. 

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Hopedrop Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This honestly expresses so much, with so few words. c:> beautiful!
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nscangel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
would you be okay with me using your poem in a graphic? I would totally link back to this page, of course.
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sure. I can't wait to see it!
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nscangel Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I used it on a thor/loki graphic on tumblr :D

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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's amazing! :D
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MissDarlingJess Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
True....<3
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K47454k1 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Professional Writer
this hardly qualifies as a story

I'm really tired of people just saying six words and calling it a story
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saminal625 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this was surprisingly powerful!
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whitty-boo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Simply beautiful! Congratulations, it is well deserved! 
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thoughtless? or an uncontrollable response?
wow, really strong message for so few words bravo my friend :clap:
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A little of both I suppose; I don't even realize I'm doing it anymore and I just can't seem to stop. 
Thank you! Glad you like it!
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Pure-Dragon97 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh man. I did not even know it was possible for so many feels to be in six words. It's uplifting but so very sad and comforting and hurting and so many things. Most of all, it's true. And the little poem in the description is just as good.
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, thank you so much!
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Infindibulator Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
I'm not sure if it's uplifting or depressing. Probably depressing.
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bit of both, I suppose. 
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ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
Nice. Well done. And a rare 6-worder that isn't overworking its title. Thanks for sharing.
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Natmonkey Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perfection.
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks!
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TruthisTruth Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation! :clap:
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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TruthisTruth Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :party:
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure! :heart:
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palaikai Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:clap:
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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jammer2isme Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
!.
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robson666 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist
congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation Clap Clap
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Writer
This is a wonderful piece. It says so much with so few words. :heart:
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Writer
My pleasure.
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thedreadpoetroberts Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
I can relate. 
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4LOVEofLuna Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Oh WOW
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) 
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014   Writer
Isn't it wonderful when we get to that point where you don't even realize you're doing it anymore?
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PeppermintPictures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful, and also slightly terrifying, ha :) 
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GrimFace242 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
Agree completely.
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